Hold Me Down: Fan comic

[Virmir]

I just noticed something about your drawing style that's been confusing me.  You're drawing a line to signify their chins, and it kind of looks like a smiley face.  Kinda been throwing me off.   For a front on shot, I'd consider no line at all down there.

Seems like a reasonable development.  Guess we'll find out what Vance things soon.

[KaiAdin]

Aww darn... it sucks he had to die... at least it was a clean cut as he noted.

ANywho... I Guess Sir Vance, I guess he would be somewhat moritfied.. at least initially, I dont see anyone who wouldn't be.. deeper down, I can't say.

I dunno Vir it looks chinish to me?

[Lopez]

This certainly took long enough. Took so long the pencils started to smear.



Hmmmm...what kind of revelation could this be?

More importantly, did you get the flow of the dialogue in the bottom right on your first read-through?

[AlexShrub]

Huh, one of the lines in there reminds me of a quote for GTA Vice City:
"Kill with Kindness, not a garden tool"-Callum Grashaw on VCPR.


Also, Sir Vance...
<.<
>.>
IT"S TIME FOR THE LANCE VANCE DANCE!

[Virmir]

I like the expressions in this one.  The flow on the bottom was clear, even before I noticed the path thing connecting them.

[Lopez]

GAH! DONE! FIN! Not much more to say here. I'll let you come to your own conclusions.





Thanks for sticking by me through all this...I know there were a lot of month-long lapses between updates, but this is the first webcomic project that I've actually been able to finish, and I feel pretty proud of that. Even though it took me so long that the ending changed no fewer than 3 times, and my character's expressions are still a little off (right up until the last face, I'll need to work on that over the summer,) it was fun to make a full story that had a beginning, middle, and end.

Done, with a story. That feels really amazing. I highly recommend trying it sometime.

Seee? I told you I can't make a story with more than twenty pa....oh wait, that's 21 if you count the epilogue...

[Virmir]

Congrats, Lopez!  Interesting little story altogether, and you've improved your fox-drawing ability through the course of it.

[KaiAdin]

heheh! Its been fun watching it as it came in throughout the months! Congratulations Lopez!