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 on: January 29, 2016, 09:14:47 PM 
Started by VirBot - Last post by Zarpaulus
It does sound rather unbelievable, doesn't it.

Duct tape for everything.

 on: January 29, 2016, 09:03:46 PM 
Started by VirBot - Last post by Radioactive_Toast
The underappreciated reporting of bizarre events that has to happen in these stories and that never gets any screentime

 on: January 29, 2016, 09:01:27 PM 
Started by VirBot - Last post by VirBot

 on: January 29, 2016, 06:02:10 PM 
Started by VirBot - Last post by Jarrod Dark
My question is this, Who among the reds figured out what Lucian can do? Surprised Arctic Fox

Not sure if they know what he can do yet, but as for who:

Ah.  Thanks.

 on: January 27, 2016, 09:42:55 PM 
Started by Kenku - Last post by Kenku
It's sort of that idea. A modern world with a magic and transformational over layer. I probably will look into differences...I mean, I expect things like...I dunno WWII probably took a more magical sense, probably some scarred lands...and the nuke replaced with a magical bomb...but still at alot of levels a modern world. Stuff to think about though.

 on: January 26, 2016, 11:33:11 PM 
Started by Kenku - Last post by Virmir
It looks like you're trying to fit Kenku into as close a copy of our world as possible.  That's okay, but kind of boring. You may want to consider focusing more on what's different in the world because that's the interesting stuff.  For example, you mentioned that some wars and historical events may have played out differently.  That's a start--focus on that!

 on: January 26, 2016, 11:29:05 PM 
Started by Selena Hallore - Last post by Virmir
The juxtaposition between the reveal in chapter 2 and the mundanity in chapter 1 is great!  My only concern is chapter 1 might be a little *too* boring.  You may want to consider giving a little teaser at the beginning of chapter 1 to hint that stuff is going to happen.  Just enough to suggest that there will be a panic moment or something--definitely want to keep the reveal a surprise until chapter 2.

Interested in seeing if Kaden can recover and regain his true memories, and also learn about his world!

 on: January 26, 2016, 11:22:31 PM 
Started by Caprice - Last post by Virmir
These are mostly a little too random for my tastes.  Do find the fish craving serum to be amusing, though!

 on: January 24, 2016, 11:38:51 PM 
Started by Virmir - Last post by VirBot

Hmmmmm, were those there last night?

 on: January 24, 2016, 07:18:48 PM 
Started by Caleb_Lloyd - Last post by Caleb_Lloyd

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