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on: June 13, 2010, 11:22:06 PM
Here is the result of the trade story for BuckyWhiteTail. And yes, that is Fizzie doing the transformation :P



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Reply #1 on: June 14, 2010, 08:23:21 AM
Hmm, different from your normal stories and there's a sense of awkwardness in the writing that might be a result of this, but its still well-written. Has more of a "dream-like" quality than your normal stuff too.

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Reply #2 on: June 14, 2010, 01:47:12 PM
Hmm, different from your normal stories and there's a sense of awkwardness in the writing that might be a result of this, but its still well-written. Has more of a "dream-like" quality than your normal stuff too.

Yea, it was kinda outside the norm for me, which is partially why it took me 2 months to get it started. Thanks for the compliments :)



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Reply #3 on: June 16, 2010, 01:25:06 AM
What's the other side of the trade? (This side is great, but I wanna read the other one too ;p)

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Reply #4 on: June 17, 2010, 08:33:48 PM
Yay!  Fizzie to the rescue!

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Reply #5 on: June 17, 2010, 11:29:35 PM
What's the other side of the trade? (This side is great, but I wanna read the other one too ;p)

The other side is a art trade, which Bucky will be doing as a comic for my "Soda TF" series.



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Reply #6 on: June 19, 2010, 11:41:20 AM
Well okay, fine. But I'll want to see it when he finishes ^.^

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Reply #7 on: June 19, 2010, 01:59:23 PM
Well okay, fine. But I'll want to see it when he finishes ^.^
Hehe, will link it :P



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Reply #8 on: July 01, 2010, 02:22:02 PM



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Reply #9 on: July 01, 2010, 07:19:15 PM
What the heck did you turn him into, Kenku? [;)

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Reply #10 on: July 01, 2010, 10:56:05 PM
What the heck did you turn him into, Kenku? [;)

An Eastern Dragon.