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on: June 09, 2010, 12:27:21 AM

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Reply #1 on: June 09, 2010, 08:55:48 PM
Quote from: Tod
This part might get changed around in the final draft... I'm trying to show the happier memory getting interrupted by the fire, but I'm not sure if that's clearly presented. I might add speech to make it flow better, but also like the idea of having the flashback be silent. What do you think?

I think it's perfectly clear.  You've got the wavy lines, and then the fiery borders moving in on the happier ones above.  Lots of times flashbacks are silent.  I don't think you need text at all, unless what's being said is part of the flashback, of course.  But the message is clear here, in my opinion.

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