Hmm, different from your normal stories and there's a sense of awkwardness in the writing that might be a result of this, but its still well-written. Has more of a "dream-like" quality than your normal stuff too.
What's the other side of the trade? (This side is great, but I wanna read the other one too ;p)
Well okay, fine. But I'll want to see it when he finishes ^.^
What the heck did you turn him into, Kenku?