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on: May 11, 2010, 10:21:52 AM
I think I've only mentioned this once, but sometimes when I have writer's block I work on a novelization of the Crimson Flag comic. I've just finished writing the prologue, so this is as good a time as any to post the first part.
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Reply #1 on: May 13, 2010, 08:32:23 PM
Yay!  Awesome job so far. I like how you added little details. [:)

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Reply #2 on: May 14, 2010, 11:59:41 AM
Indeed, very effective. Though it is based on the comic, I feel like I could get a very good hold of the characters if I hadn't read the comic.

Poor Kyle...we hardly knew ye... ]:(

...but that's just my opinion, so don't let it bother you too much!

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Reply #3 on: June 04, 2010, 03:07:44 PM
Okie, so I've finished Chapter One, which encompasses part of the piece I posted earlier but should still have a fair deal of new stuff. I've started reaching a point where it seems needed to include details not specifically mentioned in the comic, so I do hope that's all right. Anyway, enjoy!

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