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Virmir

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on: August 11, 2019, 12:07:52 PM
I'm giving the latest test print of the upcoming CF book a close read and am noticing some story-telling problems.

Is the comic confusing?

I'm considering making some minor tweaks but don't want to fix what's not broken. Let me know!

If people identify the same things I'm identifying, then I may make some adjustments in the form of more dialogue, inner-thoughts bubbles, etc.

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Reply #1 on: August 12, 2019, 10:46:50 PM
Biggest problem I have is remember who's who and who's on which side.


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Reply #2 on: August 13, 2019, 12:23:53 AM
Quote from: TyVulpintaur on August 12, 2019, 10:46:50 PM
Biggest problem I have is remember who's who and who's on which side.
Same here.

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Reply #3 on: August 13, 2019, 11:34:50 AM
That is a good thing for me to consider with character design for my next comic, ha ha

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