Author Topic: A Dragon and A Silly-Looking Mask  (Read 13114 times)

Alias

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on: August 31, 2010, 12:47:18 PM
A story I wrote.  It's, um pretty long... I hope you like it.



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Reply #1 on: September 02, 2010, 06:57:18 AM
So I finally read it last night... um, sorry for the delay.

It's a cool story... tho, I have to say, seemed longer than it took time to read. Not sure if it's bad or good. {:P

Good humour, unexpected plot twists, and everything making sense... (in the Alibi definition, at least {;)). Speaking of, this story is definitely acting as worldbuilding one... first and foremost shows the dangers of glamour, and besides that gives some more insight on the politics/goverment, the magic, and the Unusual Creatures.
All I can say in the end is "Yay for magic-to-wifi gateways"! {:P

Thanks for reading,
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Reply #2 on: September 03, 2010, 08:33:11 PM
Really enjoyed this.  A fun, well thought-out world and interesting characters.  I rather love the idea of mythical creatures on the internet chatting from some strange parallel dimension. [;)  I can't offer much in the way of advice as this story was very solid.  Very much looking forward to reading more in this setting. [:)

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Reply #3 on: September 04, 2010, 01:28:25 AM
Thanks, I'm glad you guys liked it!  The next one is coming along ^-^