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Art Gallery / Re: June - Sketch Month!
« on: June 06, 2009, 11:21:20 PM »
Gah ha ha!!!

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Writer's Guild / Re: "Reyan Saga" (unfinished)
« on: June 06, 2009, 09:41:22 PM »

Heh and it would probably destroy all oppertinites of making a good story out of the world, if all the reyan did that ];)


Ha ha.  There could be repercussions of course.  Like it needs to breathe of something. [;)


What would be more practical (and conducive for generating good plot lines) would be some sort of collar or pouch in which the life stone could be mounted or placed...


Yep, you're on the right track.  Though Gavin has nothing out in the wilderness. [;)


Or you could go the whole dungeon quest thing and keep it secutre in some deep dark cavernous system, full of traps and such for the meddlesome adventurer ]:)

He he, would work, but remember the reyan can't separate from it too far for too long.

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Writer's Guild / Re: "Reyan Saga" (unfinished)
« on: June 06, 2009, 08:39:05 PM »
That's a good thing to think about, actually.  I suppose it would save lots of trouble. [;)  Then again, there's not much in the way of tools for doing things like this.  At least not out in the wild as we see here. [;)

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Art Gallery / Re: June - Sketch Month!
« on: June 06, 2009, 08:36:38 PM »
Ha ha!  So that suggests either June is just a popular month for stuff like this, or these are so frequent I could have picked any starting month and still started along side another one. [;)

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Art Gallery / Re: The Deviant Me
« on: June 06, 2009, 08:34:26 PM »
Cool stuff.  Welcome to the forums!  Also, this amuses me. [:)

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Writer's Guild / Re: "Gone"
« on: June 06, 2009, 06:22:37 PM »
Really nice.  Lots of emotion here and a much uglier side of the war than the other story.  I love the freak-out and Sairun's proclaiming everything will be "gone".  I'm guessing the normal rules of society are gone, and soon the rest of society will be too.  Too deep of a question for me. [;)

I wonder why the fox and wolf soldiers have English names and use them for military purposes.  Especially when in the other story they were pushing the fox language.  The fox names are cooler, anyway. [;)

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Art Gallery / Re: June - Sketch Month!
« on: June 06, 2009, 05:07:54 PM »
Nice!

It's funny, I completely concocted this personal challenge to myself and started it on the exact same day as that art slam thing without ever hearing about it before hand. [;)

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Art Gallery / Re: June - Sketch Month!
« on: June 06, 2009, 04:18:22 PM »
Sketch Month (6/30)

Pontos will bake you a cake! Also, a complex noodle dish. [;)

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Writer's Guild / Re: Blood frame
« on: June 06, 2009, 01:47:34 PM »
Part 2: Well paced, exciting action.  Can't really say much more than what's been said, so looking forward to more. [:)

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Writer's Guild / Re: Blood frame
« on: June 05, 2009, 07:05:22 PM »
Aww, the characters make me feel nostalgic. [;)

Nifty aura-sight goggle things!  Too early to form much of an opinion, but looking forward to the next part!

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Art Gallery / Re: June - Sketch Month!
« on: June 05, 2009, 03:09:42 PM »
Awesome!  Now you just need to do four more to catch up. [;)

Maybe coffee will help!

Sketch Month (5/30)

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Art Gallery / Re: June - Sketch Month!
« on: June 04, 2009, 10:33:02 PM »
Sketch Month (4/30)

Could have done better...  but eh, burned out tonight. [;)

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Writer's Guild / Re: "Max Loved His Job"
« on: June 03, 2009, 09:14:52 PM »
Really nice!

I get more and more interested in this universe each story I read. [;)

It's hard to say who's "right" at this point.  The foxes seem "nice" enough, but we don't really know the events surrounding the war. (Plus we've only seen two of them.)  The foxes are pushing for equality, and I'm guessing that's what the war really was about-- the humans not treating the foxes as equals and the foxes fought back and won, so now they're going to force equality on everyone whether they like it or not.  That doesn't sound *so* horrible.

On the other hand there are a few things that would make me uneasy.  The streets are pristinely clean, which suggests rules are strict.  Are they harsh enough to change/interfere with people's lives?  And then there's the issue of the flag, which I thought was a very nice touch at the end.  Despite the attempt at equality and familiarization, there's still that foriegn, inhuman pawprint hovering over them.

Very nice. In short, can't wait to read more. (Which it seems you've just posted! [:))

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Art Gallery / Re: June - Sketch Month!
« on: June 03, 2009, 05:41:08 PM »
Sketch Month (3/30)

Teafox. [;)

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Art Gallery / Re: June - Sketch Month!
« on: June 03, 2009, 12:10:45 PM »
*is floored by the stunning level of awesomeness*

Wow!  Reflection in the eyes even! That is so cool! [:)

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