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Writer's Guild / Re: GUIDE TO ALIBI
« on: February 10, 2010, 12:24:37 AM »
Two more articles, one really long one.
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Art Gallery / Re: Arts
« on: February 09, 2010, 08:11:52 PM »
It's rougher than other kinds of art paper, so that stuff sticks to it easier.
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Art Gallery / Re: Arts
« on: February 09, 2010, 01:40:44 PM »
It's time for horrible blurry webcam photos of things I did in art class! Hurray.
Oil Pastel on charcoal paper. Not exactly done, but the finishing touches I intend to make have no hope of showing up in an awful photo, so you can have it now.
Oil Pastel on charcoal paper. Not exactly done, but the finishing touches I intend to make have no hope of showing up in an awful photo, so you can have it now.
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Writer's Guild / Re: Micro-Stories
« on: February 09, 2010, 09:07:12 AM »
Lopez, Lopez >.<
Did you read the whole thing? Maybe reread the paragraph that starts "His mother has a wonderful painting of these mountains..." once or twice? Anyway, his parents aren't that different. They're both artists in their own way.
Also, this is still Alibi, so talking cat does not automatically equal unconscious. Also I've never known an unconscious to be so helpful. Not everything is about psychology ^.^ The cat is actually meant to be Seer, one of the mythic figures from the Alibi universe, but if that were important in any way her name would be in the story. The essential thing is that the cat sort of nudges him towards resolving something.
Kai, you've got it for the most part, except for a few unimportant things I can't really make clear in a story this short. My english teacher once suggested that to seriously analyze a book, we should consider drawing a picture of it, that was part of my inspiration for this; to tell a story that has a very clear sort of a structure.
West East
Mountains------------------------------------Roof------------------------------------City
Mother Son Father
I think this young man's family deserves further exploration, so I might come back to this story and do a longer piece after I've had more time to think about it.
Kenku I like your suggestion, but I'm gonna do Kit's first because I see a way to write a fun story about it and the last couple have been all serious. Also, I might work more on the GUIDE before getting to those.
Did you read the whole thing? Maybe reread the paragraph that starts "His mother has a wonderful painting of these mountains..." once or twice? Anyway, his parents aren't that different. They're both artists in their own way.
Also, this is still Alibi, so talking cat does not automatically equal unconscious. Also I've never known an unconscious to be so helpful. Not everything is about psychology ^.^ The cat is actually meant to be Seer, one of the mythic figures from the Alibi universe, but if that were important in any way her name would be in the story. The essential thing is that the cat sort of nudges him towards resolving something.
Kai, you've got it for the most part, except for a few unimportant things I can't really make clear in a story this short. My english teacher once suggested that to seriously analyze a book, we should consider drawing a picture of it, that was part of my inspiration for this; to tell a story that has a very clear sort of a structure.
West East
Mountains------------------------------------Roof------------------------------------City
Mother Son Father
I think this young man's family deserves further exploration, so I might come back to this story and do a longer piece after I've had more time to think about it.
Kenku I like your suggestion, but I'm gonna do Kit's first because I see a way to write a fun story about it and the last couple have been all serious. Also, I might work more on the GUIDE before getting to those.
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Writer's Guild / GUIDE TO ALIBI
« on: February 09, 2010, 12:28:36 AM »
Surely there has never been a more confusing worldbuilding guide. And not nearly done yet >.<
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Writer's Guild / Re: Micro-Stories
« on: February 08, 2010, 09:31:11 PM »
Did Tvorsk's, need more suggestions.
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Art Gallery / Re: Arts
« on: February 08, 2010, 12:21:17 AM »
You cannot hope to comprehend the greatness of this hat.
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Art Gallery / Re: Arty requests
« on: February 07, 2010, 09:59:00 PM »Howlin'!
Alias... I can't really think of something that hadn't been said before, but anyway... you have an incredibly cool and unique style, and your posing ideas are at the same time unusual and very fitting.
Fizzie's tails reminds me of a Russian rocket there, tho I believe the Proton series have six, not eight engines... hmm, maybe Soyuz, then?* Tvorsk would love to get one for himself one day... well, as they say, hope dies last.
That sounded like a request to me
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Art Gallery / Re: Arty requests
« on: February 07, 2010, 07:55:25 PM »
Alright, there was a bit of a lag where I had no idea what to draw, but I did get Jonas' request done. Toon is not really my thing >.<
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Writer's Guild / Re: Micro-Stories
« on: February 05, 2010, 05:15:02 PM »Quote
(15:37:22) Tvorsk: Alias: A kid seeks a bit of peace and calmness from its unfair parents hiding on the home's roof. During one of these visits, he meets a cat there. Talks to him, ranting over the unfair life and all... then the cat begins answering back.
^_^
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Writer's Guild / Re: Micro-Stories
« on: February 05, 2010, 03:02:09 PM »
Finished Kit's story suggestion, need more suggestions!
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Art Gallery / Re: Arts
« on: February 05, 2010, 02:27:57 AM »
This is from my second ministory. Now you all have to go read that because you know this is in it.
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Writer's Guild / Re: Micro-Stories
« on: February 05, 2010, 01:21:12 AM »
C'est fini!
As a bonus, I finally have a name for the world that contains Lonely Howling and most of my other stories; it is now called the Alibi verse.
As a bonus, I finally have a name for the world that contains Lonely Howling and most of my other stories; it is now called the Alibi verse.
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Art Gallery / Re: Arts
« on: February 04, 2010, 06:20:39 PM »
>.< it is a ferret. I just kind of scrawled it since it wasn't the main point of the drawing.
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Art Gallery / Re: Arts
« on: February 04, 2010, 02:59:39 PM »
And now an uncoloured thing of Winter, albeit in bunny-form.
