Freedom Star

[Virmir]

Cool.  Glad to see this still going.

This one was a bit too space-y for me though as in too many spaceships were called by name without any description and I had trouble picturing what was going on.  Could be largely due to previous parts being a bit foggy in my mind, though.

[Digital Vulpine]

Heh, I admit that I'm definitely struggling with description, especially in large battles.  It's one thing I certainly want to work on, as I do want to try to make the world more... immersive I guess?

[Radioactive_Toast]

There, finally got around to reading all of this; I read the very first time it was posted but hadn't bothered to catch up in forever... Anyway, hoping this can be continued whenever it can, as I know your summer's petty much called for.

[Digital Vulpine]

Wow, I had to dig this thing up from four pages down.  Anyway, the seventh entry in the Freedom Star saga is finally finished!  Cry havoc, and let loose the dogs of war!

[Kenku]

May be a good idea DV to update the first post with an index.

[KaiAdin]

Woo! Yay for and Update!

[Virmir]

Exciting update!  My only qualm is that the narrator seems oddly distant when the big battle is occurring. I mean, he's in a space fighter and sort of just looking at all the stuff going around and listening to the radio.  I think you have him shoot at something once or twice but it's brief and in passing. This would be a much stronger chapter if he were more engaged, I think.

[Radioactive_Toast]

Hurzah Waaar time!
No doubt you'll be focusing more on the character/tactical level throughout, but the strategy and tactics of this coming war iiiinterest me.