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on: July 04, 2014, 10:09:19 PM

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Reply #1 on: July 04, 2014, 10:10:16 PM
*CUE DRAMATIC FLASHBACK*

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Reply #2 on: July 04, 2014, 10:10:44 PM
Hmmm, this is boring, but dramatic!  The boringness is probably because of Virmir's bad arm.



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Reply #3 on: July 04, 2014, 10:11:41 PM
FIRST!  Hmmm, this is boring, but dramatic!  The boringness is probably because of Virmir's bad arm.

It's dialog. You can't honestly expect every frame to be actiony, can you?

"This is your last chance. After this, there is no turning back. You take the blue pill - the story ends, you wake up in your bed believing whatever you want to believe. You take the red pill, you stay in Wonderland, and I show you how deep the rabbit-hole goes."
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Reply #4 on: July 04, 2014, 10:17:07 PM
Assuming Lucian still remembers and knows what she's talking about, this is the moment where he goes, "Oh crap."

"This is your last chance. After this, there is no turning back. You take the blue pill - the story ends, you wake up in your bed believing whatever you want to believe. You take the red pill, you stay in Wonderland, and I show you how deep the rabbit-hole goes."
-Morpheus


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Reply #5 on: July 05, 2014, 12:55:57 PM
There's a grammatical error in the first bubble of the third panel. You have a double negative; "wasn't not" should just be "wasn't."

BTW, I'm really loving this comic. Keep up the good work! :)



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Reply #6 on: July 05, 2014, 05:44:04 PM
BLAST. Thanks for catching that! Typo fixed. [:)

Hmmm, this is boring, but dramatic!  The boringness is probably because of Virmir's bad arm.

This page was drawn five weeks ago, and the dialogue written something like 3-4 months ago.

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Reply #7 on: July 20, 2014, 01:56:28 AM
And called it, that vest is a kind of armor.