Author Topic: Dawn of Worlds the 2nd!  (Read 98478 times)

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Reply #30 on: February 20, 2013, 07:41:51 PM
Regaining his composure, a deity decides to bestow the world with its first inkling of intelligence.

Create Race (-22): Batosians

Batosians are the oldest known species in the world to reach sapience. They are somewhat magic in nature, but this is typically restricted to natural resistance to heat and an abnormally efficient digestive system, as well as a small degree of unconscious weight manipulation. They naturally inhabit the central plateau of the north-east continent, but are unable to travel far from it due to the scarcity of water. Interestingly enough, batosians are at home in any sweltering climate that fails to boil water, but are uncomfortable in temperate climate, and have zero interest in freezing temperatures.


Physiology

Batosians are humanoid mammals likely derived from fruit bats, though it is unknown what could provoke such dynamic change, as no evidence of any ancestral species exists. They are herbivores by nature, and feed on the abundant vegetation that grows within and around their primary plateau. Typical fur colorations vary slightly, but remain within shades of brown, with a lighter patch of fur on their underbelly. Batosians reach maturity approximately four years after birth, and have an average life span of forty-six years among those who cease from old age.

Batosians typically measure between 5'3" and 5'7", with outliers measuring as high as 5'10". The average wingspan for a batosian is 10.5 feet, with 1.5 feet being the approximate distance from one shoulder to the opposing shoulder.

Flying for batosians would not be physically possible, if not for an inherent and subconscious magical ability to lessen their own weight when they feel the urge to fly or experience a rush of adrenaline. They can actively fly for approximately ten minutes without stopping, and up to fifteen if allowed to glide. The average batosian is capable of flying at speeds of ten to fifteen miles-per-hour.

There is very little sexual dimorphism between male and female batosians. Outside of gestation and nursing, the only plainly visible differences are a slightly larger amount of fur on the front of the male's pelvis. Batosians themselves distinguish between the two by giving off unique hormones when meeting a new batosian.

The most curious biological aspect of batosians are their 'mediators.' Mediators are dwarf batosians, averaging at 3'2" with very little variance, born once out of every fifty batosians. They lack their sibling's natural manipulation over weight, thus being unable to fly, but, in turn, possess a powerful emphatic aura, which make emotions of all present apparent to all present in its immediate vicinity. The range on the emphatic aura varies wildly, based on an innumerable amount of variables such as stress, intent, the presence of other mediators, and so on, to the point where the average of twenty-eight feet does not accurately portray the mediators as a whole.


Culture

Batosians are a very physical species, their native language being a combination of words and associating arm gestures, with friendly batosians including gestures that require physical contact with their speaking partner, and more gestures are incorporated based on how well the two know each other. Two life-long friends often appear more like they're frantically hugging and petting each other than having an intricate discussion. Speaking without making any sort of gesture is a severe sign of distrust and disrespect among batosians, and is often a sign that a mediator is required before violence erupts.

As a whole, batosians find little use for clothing, as it impedes their ability to make gestures and the physiology is poorly suit for it in the first place. The most batosians will wear are pouches slung around their waist, for holding water and any oddities they collect. In place of clothing, batosians decorate their bodies with intricate tattoos collected from certain inedible plants that grow in the surrounding desert. The markings are typically white, yellow, and orange, with white symbolizing peace, yellow symbolizing wisdom, and orange symbolizing protection. The patterns of the markings themselves hold little meaning, and serve primarily as a method of identifying one from another.

Batosians are lead by a group of mediators called the 'Sparks,' who meditate in silence until one or more receives inspiration, after which, deliberation is made whether or not the idea formulated should be acted upon. 'Silence' in this context is somewhat of a misnomer, as such periods tend to last a handful of seconds between hours of deliberation. When a consensus of action is reached, the word is spread by a group of specially trained messengers known as 'Flickers,' who inform the entire colony of the information, after which it is acted out with very little question.

Batosians are not a monogamous species, seeing little purpose in reproduction other than the product itself. Instead, batosians will form a tightly knit group of friends and comrades called a Sarta, and will typically only allow newborns or exceptional individuals to join after its formation. Batosians are typically born in pairs, and either parent takes one newborn back to their Sarta. In the rare event an odd number of batosians are born, the odd left-over newborn is given to the Flickers to raise as one of them.

Create Order (-0): The de facto group currently leading the Batosians are the Sparks, who receive inspiration from themselves and the divine and deliberate on whether or not they're good ideas.

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Stats

Points: 26
Cost: 22
Total Points: 4
Points Spent: 29
« Last Edit: February 26, 2013, 03:08:15 PM by Geary »

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Reply #31 on: February 20, 2013, 08:35:25 PM
FAAAAAAX!!!

You ignored my undo-ing Donnie's undo!! (That is,  heating up the area he made cold and filling in his crater.) [:(

*Glares at Donnie more*

Edit: Was informed that's actually very black topsoil... okay! (But it's still cold!)

Also, I noticed you didn't use my volcano. Would you prefer future ones in a different format? (I assumed by at least 70px you meant we could make it bigger and you could scale down yourself.)
« Last Edit: February 20, 2013, 08:59:38 PM by Virmir »

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Reply #32 on: February 20, 2013, 08:50:15 PM
The world is being torn asunder by chaos, the madness of warring gods.  This will not do, order must be protected.  Oh yes, must be protected.  But to place a hand upon the wheel of fate will require... an agent.   The will of order made manifest.

Create Avatar: 10 points

In the valley of D7 a deity forges its Champion.  
With Earth it forges feet and hands, granting them a firm foundation and strength to exercise its will.
With Fire it forges the body and tail, to light the darkness, warm the cold, and purify the unclean.
With Wind it imparts the chest and throat with breath and voice, to fuel the fire of life and speak the Truth.
With Light and Water it forges the eyes, to ever see with clarity.
With Darkness it forges the ears and nose, to reveal that which hides from the Light.
At last it imparts its creation with a Spirit, to think, feel, and know.  For without will, there can be no order.

Its creation rises, but seems incomplete.  It lacks a name, and the deity finds it cannot bestow one, for it cannot give something it does not have.  This troubles the deity, it cannot go without a name forever, but how could it gain one?  While it ponders this problem, it sets its Avatar to tending the valley it was created in.

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« Last Edit: February 20, 2013, 08:52:15 PM by Digital Vulpine »

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Reply #33 on: February 20, 2013, 10:29:03 PM
The Lurking Lord, amused all the more by the turmoil below, opts again to...

*DRAMATIC PAUSE*

...Lurk.

(No action this turn.  This is actually more fun than anything I might do right now.)



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Reply #34 on: February 23, 2013, 12:31:46 AM
Starting Points: 13

Create Avatar (-10)

Shin Foxdragohu'hil'heen''*



It is said that if one collects all seven Foxballs, the Great and Very Long Shin Foxdragohu'hil'heen'' shall appear in the sky and listen to one and only one wish of absolutely anything one's heart desires. After listening to the wish, the Great and Very Long Shin Foxdragohu'hil'heen'' shall then hand one a coupon to the nearest oriental take-out restaurant and tell one that depending on floating magic sky dragons to fulfill one's desires is, in fact, an incredibly lame and lazy thing to do, and one seriously needs to rethink one's life goals.

It is also said that, at various points in the World's existence, priests and other clingy religious types have surmised that the Great and Very Long Shin Foxdragohu'hil'heen'' is in fact a higher deity taken physical form. At this accusation the Great and Very Long Shin Foxdragohu'hil'heen'' would appear and shift his eyes and very fervently deny being one of the World-shaping deities who disguised himself as a very long dragon thing and flew down to the World to make sure things got done the right way because this notion was absolutely baseless and therefore ridiculous.


*(The proper spelling of Shin Foxdragohu'hil'heen'' includes two single apostrophes at the end. This is because adding apostrophes to names automatically makes them exotic and the Great and Very Long Shin Foxdragohu'hil'heen'' is in fact as exotic as a second derivative.)


Shape Land (-3)

A second LARGE ANGRY VOLCANO forms exactly at "C8.9 and D8,9,10", which is exact where Donnie's island has formed. This volcano should be placed so that it screws the island over as much as possible (probably right smack in the center.)

Volcano graphic, if you so choose to use it!

Ending points: 0
« Last Edit: February 24, 2013, 09:40:03 AM by Virmir »

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Reply #35 on: February 26, 2013, 12:52:41 PM
Shape Land-3 points

The demons that plague the south of the main continent ravage the landscape, infiltrating the ecosystem of the landmass and turn into into a harsh, twisted and unforgiving environment.  Monstrosities great and small corrupt it, even symbiotically worming into much of the flora.  All around the fissure into the underworld in H6 the landscape is tainted.  Past an immediate plain of desolation where not even the hardiest of plants can grow, the demonic life infiltrates the mundane and a violent bloodthirsty ecosystem repopulates the surrounding territories in a broad swath from G5 to H8.  The darkest of jungles, replete with nightmares that viscerally feed upon each other looms over.

Shape Land-3 points

The mountains too are corrupted, as creatures burrow into their heights and command the mountain tops from F6 to F8, swooping down like raptors upon their prey below.  Violent demonic energies permeate the crust of the earth to disquiet the magma deep within, cascading in forceful volacanic eruptions imbued with magical energy.  The sheer magical chaos going on in the fiercely volcanic and hellish region creates disturbances in gravity, where whole floating chunks of rock form in the atmosphere, looming over the landscape and casting enourmous shadows below; in these pits of darkness foul creatures breed themselves in grotesque fashions to spread their kind further over the world.

Create Avatar-10 points

The realms beyond are disquieted by this disturbance into this mundane plane.  Indeed, even through the demon's underworld "homeworld" the disturbance is noticable.

This was when a draconic warrior named Jije finds this infant world.  

Ironically it is from the demon's own pit that he emerges; from a realm far beyond this one he plunged into the underworld to smite and crush as many twisted entities as was possible, for motivations unknown.  Later generations will sing of his story and poeticize his mythical origins, but upon finding the demonic scourge raping a pristine new world, he dedicates himself to protecting it.

Bursting out he slays like the divine champion he is, stemming the demonic tide wherever he can.  It is not enough to destroy or even drive back the invasive monstrosities, but halting their expansion is something he proves quite adept at.

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« Last Edit: February 26, 2013, 02:44:36 PM by Radioactive_Toast »

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Reply #36 on: February 27, 2013, 02:11:22 PM
Ok, so I'm going to be delayed somewhat with regards to actually making a proper update due to having had all of my free time devoured by work. That said, in the interest of keeping things moving I am going to post the latest point totals and simply pass my turn. So without further ado, here's the current point totals. Maps will follow as soon as I can update them.

Points
Radioactive Toast - 16 - 16 + 7 + 3 = 10
Kenku - 14 - 0 + 5 + 0 = 19
Dragyn - 18 - 0 + 8 + 0 = 26
Virmir - 13 - 13 + 7 + 3 = 10
Digital Vulpine - 15 - 10 + 5 + 3 = 13
Geary - 26 - 22 + 8 + 1 = 13
Donnie - 18 - 13 + 11 + 0 = 18
Fax - 23 - 0 + 9 + 0 = 32

/edit/ And here's the maps!




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« Last Edit: March 04, 2013, 11:10:07 PM by Fax »



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Reply #37 on: February 27, 2013, 03:44:44 PM
Shape Land-3 Points

From I5 to I8, the land shifts and rises up, joining the landmass to the east.  It is quite thin near the poles but with tendrils of island chains that creep up to the mainland and connect with it.

Shape Climate-2 Points

This new land quickly freezes to glacier conditions like its eastern reaches, but the demons from the north swoop down, freezing by the hordes until some number adapt to the arctic conditions and begin to thrive, burrowing into the glaciers and infesting the landscape.

Shape Land-3 Points

From I1 to I4 this arc of land is completed, creating a new southern continent that hides the south pole from the sea.  Here though the plate action is more more forceful, creating mountains that are truly awe inspiring, the highest stretching into the stratosphere.  The highest peek is over 9 miles tall, just about 15 kilometers.  

Shape Climate-2 Points

This region is similarly glaciated, though its high altitudes create much more dramatic glacier formations.

However, Jije's efforts largely keep the demons from infesting this region, at least for a time.

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Reply #38 on: February 27, 2013, 09:45:12 PM

Create Avatar(10): As the shatters lands that made the islands cooled, there was the appearance of a strange egg. Large in size, and firey in color, the egg sat silentently for many years. The waves crashed on it, and the wind blew and rolled about it, but nothing seems to awake it from its solumn place.

Suddenly, one day, a Coconut fell out of a tree, and landed on the egg with a sudden "THUD" and the sound of glass breaking, and the egg shell shattered. As it did there was a tornado of flame suddenly rose into the sky knocking trees to and fro, before as suddenly shinking to the ground, leaving a tall feathered anothermorph, its feathers the colors of rubies.

The Phoenix Yawned. "Good Morning...my is this an interesting place to land"

Shape Land(3) Create a smattering of small Oasis' in a chain Connecting the fertile land of A10 with Geary's Plateau.

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Reply #39 on: February 27, 2013, 11:04:45 PM
There is a mysterious silence as an unnamed power makes preparations for its greatest creation, a mighty army that will carry its Truth to the corners of the world.

For now, nothing happens.

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Reply #40 on: March 01, 2013, 12:42:53 PM
At first, nothing happened.

Then, miraculously, nothing continued to happen.

(No action.)



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Reply #41 on: March 02, 2013, 04:50:13 PM
Starting Points: 10

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Create Order: The Society of Individuals Informed Against SATAN (Donnie), Batosian Division



The Great and Very Long Shin Foxdragohu'hil'heen'' saw that the race of bat people needed guidance against the great evils of the world and thus flew down to them to get them to stop hugging each other for five minutes and watch a presentation with pictures in it. Though these very informative pictures, The Great and Very Long Shin Foxdragohu'hil'heen'' taught this young, vulnerable race about the cold-hearted and wretchedly evil SATAN (Donnie) who seeks only to inflict misery upon the world. This very informative presentation (and associated pamphlets distributed post-presentation) spurred the creation of The Society of Individuals Informed Against SATAN (Donnie).


Effect: The Society of Individuals Informed Against SATAN (Donnie) seek to protect the other members of the Batosian race against SATAN (Donnie)'s maniacal influences, effectively acting as guardians. Should SATAN (Donnie) try to influence the Batosian race in any way, (i.e. creating an order, influencing the race to do something, etc.) The Society of Individuals Informed Against SATAN (Donnie) would essentially flip out and try to stop it (possibly in ways involving distributing informational pamphlets). (I imagine the Fax-overlord would roll dice or something to determine whether their stopping is successful.)


Remaining Points: 8

I actually want to wait a bit to see the map before spending any more points.
« Last Edit: March 05, 2013, 05:39:05 PM by Virmir »

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Reply #42 on: March 03, 2013, 09:11:25 PM
Noticing the sudden increase in species composed entirely of a single individual, a god decides he doesn't want to be left out on the fun.

Create Avatar (10): A small comet is redirected into the forming world's trajectory. Much to the chagrin of the Batosians, the burning comet appeared to be heading smack-dab for their plateau. Just when they had fled to what safety they could and braced for the worse, the comet halted on the small oasis atop the plateau, with nary a ripple to imply it ever had moved in the first place.

A slumbering creature slumbers within the perfectly-cut shard of invulnerable ice, its dreams occasionally manifesting themselves to impact the world, but mostly just manifesting sea-salt caramel ice-cream. Not that the Batosians mind.

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Stats

Points: 13
Cost: 10
Total Points: 3
Points Spent: 39
« Last Edit: March 09, 2013, 04:04:22 PM by Geary »

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Reply #43 on: March 06, 2013, 09:33:43 AM
The great silray deity yawns

Shape Land & Climate

Make it like this:


A land separated by a sea river to the north forms with a small mountain range blocking the northern cold's ice flows however accumulating snow allowing for lots and lots of rivers to flow down.

The Volcano shall become INACTIVE for all eternity but it still smolders and pumps ash into the air, obscuring the sun 'somewhat' (cooling the affected lands)  and drenching the ground around the volcano and all in the wind path with ash. Granted said ash is filled with good soil nutrients so said land is rather fertile if folks can deal with it being cloudy everyday.

Points Remaining: 12
« Last Edit: March 06, 2013, 05:20:23 PM by Donnie »



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Reply #44 on: March 06, 2013, 10:26:54 PM
Turn 4

And thus the thermal war continues! What madness will arise this turn? Who will get involved? Will Virmir ever get to keep a big volcano?

Also, remember to vote as to if you want the first age to continue another turn or for us to move on to the second age.

Points
Radioactive Toast - 10 - 10 + 7 + 3 = 10
Kenku - 19 - 13 + 9 + 0 = 15
Dragyn - 26 - 0 + 5 + 0 = 31
Virmir - 10 - 2 + 8 + 0 = 16
Digital Vulpine - 13 - 0 + 8 + 0 = 21
Geary - 13 - 10 + 8 + 2 = 13
Donnie - 18 - 6 + 4 + 0 = 16
Fax - 32 - 0 + 7 + 0 = 39




(the images link to higher resolution versions)

Races
Batosians

Orders
-The Society of Individuals Informed Against SATAN (Donnie), Batosian Division
-The Sparks

Avatars
The Avatar of the great DV.
Shin Foxdragohu'hil'heen''
Jije
The Phoenix
A slumbering creature




« Last Edit: March 06, 2013, 10:28:32 PM by Fax »