Author Topic: Props and Paints  (Read 4349 times)

Jonas

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on: November 12, 2011, 03:21:47 PM
A Halloween commission from Traxer. His request was for "A last-minute mask to have raccoonish side effects". This ended up waaaay longer than I initially thought it would, but it was fun to write :D

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Reply #1 on: November 16, 2011, 10:12:09 AM
I liked, even though it was simplistic.  I expected either the makeup or something at the party itself to have the trans formative powers.  It's good that there wasn't one single obvious possibility, at least.  Also I like how you added the issue of "cute vs. cool", making it a deeper story than just a silly TF. Nice work. [:)

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