Cool stuff. Yay "fox-humanoid".
The "Mistaken" one was confusing due to the panel order. I had to scratch my head several times, then read the description before I saw the arrows. You usually don't want to mess with reading order standards much.
So these are all part of one story then? As you say, you have a lot of intros here, so at this point they all seem like different stories and it's kind of disjointed. Though I imagine when you get back to each character's story, you'll group the pages together so they're easier to read. Looking forward to reading more.
