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William Swiftfoot
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"Join for drinks and enojy the side effects!"
Meep! Meep!
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December 06, 2010, 06:00:48 PM
Here's the second of the three trades I owe. Akusai of FA gave me free reign and after a description of activities, I came up with the energy drinks(originally it was going to be a cardinal, but I decided this would be cooler)
Virmir
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These sorts of things happen.
Re: Meep! Meep!
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December 08, 2010, 08:06:21 PM
*grins* Looking at the title, I'll admit to wondering "what the heck is this one going to be?" until I got a few lines in.
Couple of typos though! You use "fir" in place of fur at one point, and I think you miss a word or two on a few sentences.
Virmir
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