Author Topic: Tales From the Cycle  (Read 12837 times)

Fen

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on: April 09, 2011, 08:25:45 PM
First story is now up!
keep in mind this is intended to be a shorter story taking place in the universe to kickstart my brain for the bigger one coming up.
(if you'd like a cameo, you can still make a request for one if you like.)
« Last Edit: June 01, 2011, 04:34:24 PM by Fen »

When was the last time you hugged your sammich?


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Reply #1 on: April 09, 2011, 08:31:57 PM
Tirien, the Drarowkune Swordfighter.

Basically, while good, he tends to be extremely aloof and seems uncaring, however he is extremely dedicated to protecting others, even if it means killing someone who is innocent. This mostly comes from losing far to many that he cares about, due to plague.  He is a skilled swordfighter, but unable to use magick. He wields a Katana named Dragonfox.

Tirien is a Drarowkune. (A mix of Dragon, Crow, and Kitsune) His four tail's are tipped with black fur, not white. His Right wing is that of a dragon, and his left is that of a crow. His fur pattern is that of a red fox. He has black feathers at his wrists and scattering of them on his chest. His feet are similar to a dragon's in form, but covered in dark red fur instead of scales. He wears a garb similar to that of a Red Mage.

As a child, he was far more open and caring about others, and still extremely protective, often fighting anything or anyone that tried to hurt friends or family, and usually winning due to some early sword training from his father. His mother had died when he was born, however. His father is a ordinary fox, no multiple tails or wings. Who or what his mother was is only known by his father, Karas.
« Last Edit: June 01, 2011, 04:44:36 PM by Tirien »

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Reply #2 on: June 29, 2011, 08:53:28 PM
Apologies, Fenrs, I did read this one a while back, but forgot to post feedback.

First, the very first line about horns just coming in as a measure of age is just a really cool way to start a story. [:)

It sounds cool, but too short to give much feedback as is. I'm assuming you're just providing a little background/mood setting info, which does get me interested. Looking forward to reading more. [:)

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