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Writer's Guild / Re: A Creative Problem [New Story!]
« on: September 05, 2012, 06:01:02 PM »
Nice! I read it on FA and thought it was a finished story, but i notice now that it says "Part 1" which is quite cool since I want to see what else this Artist guy will do and how this trio will fare |:P

Zane's new form is cool and imaginative, but also creepy when you think just how handicapped he is.
I also like how you used the ink pen TF method for Sam, hehe.

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Writer's Guild / Re: Gears Interlude: A Helping Hand
« on: July 29, 2012, 04:30:27 PM »
Hehe, nice.

For the ending you could make a short scene where Coby wakes up and finds the transformed Flynn. An exchange between the two after the transformation has potential |:P

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Writer's Guild / Re: Gears: Coby and Flynn's Debut!
« on: July 26, 2012, 05:11:46 PM »
Nice introduction for the characters! This one is a much more simpler and casual start for a story compared with the first draft you wrote before (With the weird guy showing up right when Coby and Flynn were about to get groceries), which works better for a long story since it doesn't jump straight into a complex plot and lets the reader familiarize (pun intended) with the characters.

Regarding the removed footnotes, did you remove them altogether or added them to the actual story? (I didn't compare both versions, so i can't say).
Unless they were really unimportant, fitting them into the story would be the best action.

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Writer's Guild / Re: No Overtime
« on: July 26, 2012, 04:26:55 PM »
Nice! Creepiness aside (Even if it's portrayed comically, what with the pie and all) it's a really neat tf story.

The first two paragraphs were a bit confusing at first. Took me a bit to identify who's who, but i suppose it was because I'm more used to read and write stories in third and not first person.

Since it's not mentioned, I wonder if Trent got the same time limited curse as Fenton or if he caught the Kitsune in a bad mood and ended up being stuck permanently as a biturong.

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Art Gallery / Re: Free Chibis! (open)
« on: June 27, 2012, 09:19:29 PM »
Ok, I'm in |:P

http://www.furaffinity.net/view/8172420/ http://i611.photobucket.com/albums/tt191/DaemonPontos/Main%20drawings/1262062772swiftcutter_ethaniel.jpg (Chibi reference, hehe)
No need to draw the armor, btw. You can draw me in a t-shirt or wearing nothing but the pants and collar if you want to.

As for pose, maybe standing and playing with my collar?

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Crimson Flag Comic / Re: Comic 200
« on: June 15, 2012, 10:47:48 PM »
On another note, I find the phrase "scheming white-tips" incredibly amusing.
Vir loves insults that refer to physical characteristics |:P

Remember "Snake-tailed derelicts" from Epic Battle? Hehe

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Writer's Guild / Re: Thinking of offering story commissions...
« on: May 16, 2012, 11:03:27 PM »
Ty seems to commission a story from members here like once per month or so.

He generally makes a thread here looking for a writer (Latest one was 10 days ago), so I'd say keep an eye on this sub-forum (Subscribe to it, or add this to your RSS reader: http://crimsonflagcomic.com/forum/index.php?type=atom;board=3.0;action=.xml), or PM him saying you're available for story commissions for whenever he feels like getting one.

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Random Topics / Re: Wanted: Soda Volunteers
« on: April 28, 2012, 06:08:03 PM »
I'd volunteer, but...  I'm a hewmon to fuzzie TF person, so there's not much point in volunteering my character.
I'm the same, but fuzzy to fuzzy tf is also cool if done right.

Nonetheless, you can volunteer for the AR soda, or tell Kenku to create one for TG or inflation |:P

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Random Topics / Re: Wanted: Soda Volunteers
« on: April 27, 2012, 11:40:05 PM »
Sure, i volunteer if you're ok with that |:P

For the soda, any of these sounds good: White Hare Cola, Bunstel Light, Fountain Dew or Masked Bandit.

Refs: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/3403259/ and http://www.furaffinity.net/view/7761892/ for the armor and collar mainly. Everyone draws cougars in a different way for some reason so refs don't really do much in that regard, heh.
The armor is optional, btw. I'm totally fine with wearing something simple like a tshirt and pants (Which might make a TF easier to draw). The collar is important, though, since it's the main accessory from my char.

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Random Topics / Re: Post your Tod Icons!
« on: April 27, 2012, 07:34:37 PM »
Here are mine! I think I'm not missing any.

Main icons


Misc icons

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Crimson Flag Comic / Re: Comic 192
« on: April 21, 2012, 01:50:03 AM »
I think a "CRACK" in the fourth panel would have been better a better addition than that "VAULT" in the fifth.

The act of throwing objects doesn't really make me think in such a sound effect >_>

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Art Gallery / Re: Free drawings
« on: April 06, 2012, 04:12:14 PM »
Awesome! Thanks a lot Narwhal  |:)

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Art Gallery / Re: Free drawings
« on: April 03, 2012, 05:42:26 PM »
If you want to give it a try, you can draw my Cougar MK character |:)

http://www.furaffinity.net/view/3403259/
http://www.metamorkeep.com/gallery/pics/mk_ethan_1280.png

No need to draw the same pose. You can try another one |:P
Thanks!

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Art Gallery / Re: Drawing Requests! (Closed)
« on: March 29, 2012, 07:31:04 PM »
#1). March
#2). April
#3). May
#4). June
#5). July
#6). August

Therefore, Tech deserves it, not me.

Uh, no...
You don't have to count the distance from this month to next August. You need to count the distance from last August to this month. Just like Zavier did.

Your previous request was August 10th. That was seven months and three weeks ago. You qualify just fine for this request thread.

So please, edit your first reply and add the request description >_>

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