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Comic Discussion => Previously Hosted and Past Comics => Loose Ferrets => Topic started by: VirBot on September 30, 2010, 01:01:02 AM
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Comic 010
Post by:
VirBot
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September 30, 2010, 01:01:02 AM
(http://looseferrets.crimsonflagcomic.com/comics/00000010.png)
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Re: Comic 010
Post by:
Virmir
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September 30, 2010, 08:39:03 PM
I would consider re-wording the first balloon, "Inspiration, like a real ferret, is lured...", to keep it all singular so it flows better.
Loving this comic so far. [:)
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Re: Comic 010
Post by:
Sarif
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October 01, 2010, 02:47:25 AM
Agreed, Vimir.
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Re: Comic 010
Post by:
Jonas
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October 01, 2010, 12:28:43 PM
I like the upside-down "Shiny!" dialogue
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Re: Comic 010
Post by:
Geo Holms
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October 01, 2010, 01:31:16 PM
Revised and fixed. Need to fix the spelling of a pass strip eventually too. >.>
And thank ye. ^^ Now its moving to the Beyond. *colors and scans frantically*
Shiny shall appear at random like this...as you would guess. ;3