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Comic Discussion => Hiatus and Past Comics => Loose Ferrets => Topic started by: VirBot on September 30, 2010, 01:01:02 AM

Title: Comic 010
Post by: VirBot on September 30, 2010, 01:01:02 AM
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Title: Re: Comic 010
Post by: Virmir on September 30, 2010, 08:39:03 PM
I would consider re-wording the first balloon, "Inspiration, like a real ferret, is lured...", to keep it all singular so it flows better.

Loving this comic so far. [:)
Title: Re: Comic 010
Post by: Sarif on October 01, 2010, 02:47:25 AM
Agreed, Vimir.
Title: Re: Comic 010
Post by: Jonas on October 01, 2010, 12:28:43 PM
I like the upside-down "Shiny!" dialogue
Title: Re: Comic 010
Post by: Geo Holms on October 01, 2010, 01:31:16 PM
Revised and fixed. Need to fix the spelling of a pass strip eventually too. >.>

And thank ye. ^^ Now its moving to the Beyond. *colors and scans frantically*

Shiny shall appear at random like this...as you would guess. ;3