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Title: The Sheriff's Charge
Post by: Jonas on July 20, 2010, 09:26:57 AM
Written for Aleph, who just loves cartoons. I've placed him as the sheriff of a town of toons and wrote about him introducing a new citizen to the inked lifestyle. I wouldn't worry too much about the exact mechanics behind the setting since I don't have them fully worked out. I also may have sacrificed some believability on Tuner's part in order to make an ending Aleph would like.
Title: Re: The Sheriff's Charge
Post by: Virmir on July 22, 2010, 08:37:11 PM
Good story!  I like the concept here, with the refuge for toons that need to get away from humans, and how new toons might be a little freaked out and out of place at first.  Very nice. [:)
Title: Re: The Sheriff's Charge
Post by: Jonas on July 22, 2010, 10:28:49 PM
*tailwags*