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Other Realms => Writer's Guild => Topic started by: AlexShrub on January 24, 2010, 08:42:13 PM
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First story I've written and I'm currently typing it to put in on the Intardnet.
TF by corporation into a raccoon.
Striving for grammar, although one of them has a small POV discrepancy, but its minor.
Compiled em in preperation for getting off (or on [:P) my lazy bum and continuing my story.
Added Superchapter 2 - in progress, I'll update this file and not have the separate thingies people seem to hate [fox]
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I like the originality! The twist ending gave the story an especially good punch to it, in addition the escape from the fox. It was a very colorful depiction of a raccoon's world (and I must admit, it gave me an idea for a story as well.)
I hope to see more of your stories! (though, perhaps, as one document?)
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Fun story so far! (But gah! Poor fox. [;))
Yeah, you might want to consider consolidating them all into one attachment, or pasting the parts into the forum itself. Either way, looking forward to the next part. [:)
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Fun story so far! (But gah! Poor fox.)
Don't Worry, the fox was a Red.
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Fun story so far! (But gah! Poor fox.)
Don't Worry, the fox was a Red.
But red's aren't the overly egotistical ones, seeing as they don't think they can escape all harm by climbing trees!
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The ending seems a little abrupt. It doesn't say anything about WHY the organization is doing this cover up or how they plan to avoid repurcussions, etc. It's an interesting idea and pretty well written out, but it sort of leaves you wondering what the point was.
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The ending seems a little abrupt. It doesn't say anything about WHY the organization is doing this cover up or how they plan to avoid repurcussions, etc. It's an interesting idea and pretty well written out, but it sort of leaves you wondering what the point was.
But its not done yet!
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Oh alex! maybe you should just reply to this thread with the new chapters instead of editing the original post, that way whole thread gets Bumped up to the top and people know its been updated!
(especially if they wern't on the chat when it was announced! / don't read the chat logs!) ]:)
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Oh alex! maybe you should just reply to this thread with the new chapters instead of editing the original post.
Well than that leads back to the "Too many sections, ARGH!" complaints [:P
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not really on this site, but on FA
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ah true!
haha probably the best idea then is to update the OP with the combined file and just announce it with a new post! ];)
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Thats the plan! [:)
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Personally, I would just copy+paste each new part directly into the forums with a new post each time. [;)
Anyway, looks interesting so far. Looking forward to reading more. [:)
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Chapter 2. We now know more about the characters! But what are they planning? Are they Gonna go in like Solid Snake, like Ninja Gaiden, or just not go in at all and call it a day? ];) We shall soon see...
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But what are they planning? Are they Gonna go in like Solid Snake, like Ninja Gaiden, or just not go in at all and call it a day?
Indeed you shall, in about a week [fox]
BTW I have no idea how those games do things.
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Updated! click the superchapter-2 link