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Title: Comic 307
Post by: VirBot on July 04, 2014, 10:09:19 PM
(http://crimsonflagcomic.com/comics/00000307.jpg)
Title: Re: Comic 307
Post by: PrincessHotcakes on July 04, 2014, 10:10:16 PM
*CUE DRAMATIC FLASHBACK*
Title: Re: Comic 307
Post by: Caprice on July 04, 2014, 10:10:44 PM
Hmmm, this is boring, but dramatic!  The boringness is probably because of Virmir's bad arm.
Title: Re: Comic 307
Post by: plazmastorm on July 04, 2014, 10:11:41 PM
FIRST!  Hmmm, this is boring, but dramatic!  The boringness is probably because of Virmir's bad arm.

It's dialog. You can't honestly expect every frame to be actiony, can you?
Title: Re: Comic 307
Post by: plazmastorm on July 04, 2014, 10:17:07 PM
Assuming Lucian still remembers and knows what she's talking about, this is the moment where he goes, "Oh crap."
Title: Re: Comic 307
Post by: Bizkit on July 05, 2014, 12:55:57 PM
There's a grammatical error in the first bubble of the third panel. You have a double negative; "wasn't not" should just be "wasn't."

BTW, I'm really loving this comic. Keep up the good work! :)
Title: Re: Comic 307
Post by: Virmir on July 05, 2014, 05:44:04 PM
BLAST. Thanks for catching that! Typo fixed. [:)

Hmmm, this is boring, but dramatic!  The boringness is probably because of Virmir's bad arm.

This page was drawn five weeks ago, and the dialogue written something like 3-4 months ago.
Title: Re: Comic 307
Post by: Zeo Fawx on July 20, 2014, 01:56:28 AM
And called it, that vest is a kind of armor.