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Title: A drink to Taurific Proportions
Post by: William Swiftfoot on January 03, 2011, 08:32:13 PM

Here's a little story about a Jackal's Wish to be bigger, and getting more than he bargained for.  [:P

Story trade done with Virmir who did the lovely picture of Medik Taur.

Title: Re: A drink to Taurific Proportions
Post by: Geary on January 03, 2011, 08:57:45 PM

Nice, but it seemed a bit short, like there was a well-made beginning and middle, but the ending was just kinda slapped on there

Title: Re: A drink to Taurific Proportions
Post by: William Swiftfoot on January 03, 2011, 09:53:35 PM

Hmm...that is kinda due to I failed on trying to expand the reactions I think. If Virmir or Medik have an idea although, I have no prob with trying to expand it a little.

Title: Re: A drink to Taurific Proportions
Post by: Virmir on January 04, 2011, 08:28:35 PM

Cool.  This was fun. [:)  I noticed you do taur transformations the exact opposite as me. (I imagine front legs coming from the hips, where you have hind legs sprouting from behind.  Not saying you should change it. Just amusing. [:))

It is short, but that's really the point of these vignettes you write-- just a quick, silly transformation.  So it's okay with me. [:)

Title: Re: A drink to Taurific Proportions
Post by: William Swiftfoot on January 04, 2011, 08:59:43 PM

Heheh, yea I usually do taur transformations the other way around, but it just seemed sensible this way, although I think its partially cause tauring for me usually is more the hips extending backwards instead of the body extending both ways.

Title: Re: A drink to Taurific Proportions
Post by: PrincessHotcakes on January 05, 2011, 06:23:26 PM

Getting more than he bargained for?  Weeeeell, I guess technically that's true; Glorious SMASHING is always a wonderful thing ]:P