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Title: King's Pride
Post by: Jonas on September 18, 2010, 06:23:33 PM

This story is set in the Pig and Whistle universe. To learn about the setting please read http://shifti.org/wiki/Pig_and_Whistle

the TL/DR version though is that there's a disease called Blowtorch Fever ("The Torch") that turns about 30% of its victims into furries ("teefers").

Title: Re: King's Pride
Post by: Virmir on September 27, 2010, 11:33:38 AM

(Gah, forgot to reply Thursday. [;))

Looks interesting.  I take it that there's some going-ons about the setting that have been established, and that you are building on.  I wasn't lost or anything though, and felt pretty satisfied about the info you presented about "the treatment".  Still, kinda depressing, and from a setting I don't find that appealing personally.  Your writing is solid though, as always. [:)