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Other Realms => Writer's Guild => Topic started by: Alias on August 31, 2010, 12:47:18 PM
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A story I wrote. It's, um pretty long... I hope you like it.
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So I finally read it last night... um, sorry for the delay.
It's a cool story... tho, I have to say, seemed longer than it took time to read. Not sure if it's bad or good. {:P
Good humour, unexpected plot twists, and everything making sense... (in the Alibi definition, at least {;)). Speaking of, this story is definitely acting as worldbuilding one... first and foremost shows the dangers of glamour, and besides that gives some more insight on the politics/goverment, the magic, and the Unusual Creatures.
All I can say in the end is "Yay for magic-to-wifi gateways"! {:P
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Really enjoyed this. A fun, well thought-out world and interesting characters. I rather love the idea of mythical creatures on the internet chatting from some strange parallel dimension. [;) I can't offer much in the way of advice as this story was very solid. Very much looking forward to reading more in this setting. [:)
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Thanks, I'm glad you guys liked it! The next one is coming along ^-^