Title: Re: Rain Burn, page 363
Post by: Cody The Werewolf on January 21, 2025, 09:17:37 AM
The vore euthusiasts are now pleased
Title: Re: Rain Burn, page 363
Post by: ArchTeryx on January 21, 2025, 11:22:49 PM
Prime example of the horror aspect of vore. Extra horrifying when you realize that Saida might have grown up with these bodyguards, and even Brand was trying to protect her from having to see the last one put to death... very slowly. And as far as Suzokon-kyō is concerned, he may as well have had a pleasant plate of sushi. Didn't skip a beat - the moment the combat ended, the zenko-kitsune mask was right back up.
You created a pretty damn good old-school nogitsune villain in Suzokon-kyō. Great job there!
Title: Re: Rain Burn, page 363
Post by: Virmir on January 22, 2025, 07:08:59 PM
Thanks for stopping by! Always enjoy reading your comments on FA.
Title: Re: Rain Burn, page 363
Post by: ArchTeryx on January 22, 2025, 08:15:29 PM
Awww, thank you, Virmir! Just call me your resident weeaboo. 😂
I'm an old study of Japanese ancient history and mythology, and I can't tell you how gratifying it is to see a kitsune that acts like a kitsune. There always has to be room for artistic freedom and the needs of the story, but in many ways, Suzokon-kyō - Lord Suzocon - is very familiar. So, in his own way, is Roko-san. That does nothing to spoil the story! It helps immerse me into it, and it's a wonderful stereotype-smasher for these enigmatic, mischievous and sometimes malign fox spirits.
There are many other compliments I could pay to your storywriting skills. You took a body-swap buddy comedy and, rather like Valsalia and Out of Placers, built a deep and engaging universe and story around it. Your (black) humor is first rate and so are your pithy descriptions.
And that's why you're one of the very few webcomics I take the time to follow, and bought your book (and will buy any others, too!) I eagerly look forward to seeing how this arc resolves.
( "Burando-san, tekidona kaminari enerugī de tsudzukete kudasai." )