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Comic Discussion => Crimson Flag Comic => Topic started by: VirBot on July 04, 2014, 10:09:19 pm

Title: Comic 307
Post by: VirBot on July 04, 2014, 10:09:19 pm

(http://crimsonflagcomic.com/comics/00000307.jpg)

Title: Re: Comic 307
Post by: PrincessHotcakes on July 04, 2014, 10:10:16 pm

*CUE DRAMATIC FLASHBACK*

Title: Re: Comic 307
Post by: Caprice on July 04, 2014, 10:10:44 pm

Hmmm, this is boring, but dramatic!  The boringness is probably because of Virmir's bad arm.

Title: Re: Comic 307
Post by: plazmastorm on July 04, 2014, 10:11:41 pm

Quote from: MasterOfCaprice on July 04, 2014, 10:10:44 pm

FIRST!  Hmmm, this is boring, but dramatic!  The boringness is probably because of Virmir's bad arm.

It's dialog. You can't honestly expect every frame to be actiony, can you?

Title: Re: Comic 307
Post by: plazmastorm on July 04, 2014, 10:17:07 pm

Assuming Lucian still remembers and knows what she's talking about, this is the moment where he goes, "Oh crap."

Title: Re: Comic 307
Post by: Bizkit on July 05, 2014, 12:55:57 pm

There's a grammatical error in the first bubble of the third panel. You have a double negative; "wasn't not" should just be "wasn't."

BTW, I'm really loving this comic. Keep up the good work! :)

Title: Re: Comic 307
Post by: Virmir on July 05, 2014, 05:44:04 pm

BLAST. Thanks for catching that! Typo fixed. [:)

Quote from: MasterOfCaprice on July 04, 2014, 10:10:44 pm

Hmmm, this is boring, but dramatic!  The boringness is probably because of Virmir's bad arm.

This page was drawn five weeks ago, and the dialogue written something like 3-4 months ago.

Title: Re: Comic 307
Post by: Zeo Fawx on July 20, 2014, 01:56:28 am

And called it, that vest is a kind of armor.