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Other Realms => Writer's Guild => Topic started by: Jonas on November 12, 2011, 03:21:47 PM

Title: Props and Paints
Post by: Jonas on November 12, 2011, 03:21:47 PM

A Halloween commission from Traxer. His request was for "A last-minute mask to have raccoonish side effects". This ended up waaaay longer than I initially thought it would, but it was fun to write :D

Title: Re: Props and Paints
Post by: Virmir on November 16, 2011, 10:12:09 AM

I liked, even though it was simplistic.  I expected either the makeup or something at the party itself to have the trans formative powers.  It's good that there wasn't one single obvious possibility, at least.  Also I like how you added the issue of "cute vs. cool", making it a deeper story than just a silly TF. Nice work. [:)