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Random Topics / CZM offline

« on: October 03, 2014, 10:49:42 PM »

well... i must says this for everyone..

but i must take offline for a long time.. because some homework,working in home , take exam and some stuff in home

maybe i must go to hospital for surgery...

i just can says sorry if i was not in here again...

thanks...  friend

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Writer's Guild / CZM back story

« on: July 28, 2014, 04:39:49 PM »

1999, 23 january (underground lab)

knocking  the door
"daddy what are you doing?"

yep..i am CZM ... my father was working in the underground lab ... for other experiment
i dont know...for what.. my father is works... i thinks he's a normal scientist
my mother already death when i born... i dont have any family ... my father always with me
i live on earth

my father is opened the door*
"what are you doing son...?"
"can you play with me dad...?" i said
father pats me
"I'm working for now. still many things I need to finish"
"but...i'm lonely.. daddy..." i said
"you will never alone...my son..."

father pats me again and told me to sleeping to the bedrooms...
and he close the door in lab...

i walked slowly to the bedroom and hear a someone shout in the lab
and the scream was my father

i open the lab and looks so many monster in the lab and looks my father is dying. he looks me in the lab...
"run..." he said
i break the door in the lab...but it's locked...i'm still stay away from monster...i'm 7 year old kid
"go to portal my son..." he said
"but dad...?"
"dont worry about me..."

and before throught the portal , i  take a backpack , some potion and some gloves
then i throught the portal

i looks back my father and father keep said..
"you will never alone..."

and i go to other dimensions , transform into a 7 year old fox...and falls down on the grass
"where i am...?..."
and i looks a river near me... then i drink it...
i looks my self to the pool...
"i am.......?....a red Fox...what happened with me...?..."
then i open the books from the backpack...it's full of recipe of potion and map
and some letter and maple leaf ...and i read it
"a adventure...?...alchemist....?...explorer...?...i'm still dont know this words...."

then i go to airport but i dont have any money...  and i see a 15 year old gray fox looks confused
"where is my jars...? Gah!!.... i dont want that jars is vanished...!!"

and i looks a jars...it's seem glowing in the jars...then i take it and give it to Gray fox
"oh...my jars...thanks...red fox..."
i'm nods
" can i go to airport mr ?"
"sure... !!!"

and he buy 2 ticket from airport...then i grabs one and go to air ship...
"hey...?!!... what is your name..?" the gray fox said but i not hear him...

2 weeks later i'm still in the airship...and looks a lands...
" YAY!!!...i see lands in here..."
and the airship is landed then i going out from the airship
i look the board singned "caerreyn vilage" and i still keep walking for looking a river...

i see a river...then i drink the water from river and standing on edge of river

"why my father is leave me here....why...?" i'm sad

i'm gloomy on edge of river

"hey Selden .. let's play ball" Geary said

"why we do not invite red fox play with us?"Selden said .

Jackal said"he's a weird kid .. Why we play with him"

then in the river I'm sad because my father had died. Spontaneous someone who has held my shoulders.
"hi red fox...do you want to play a Ball With us"Selden said
(look back)" emm...ehhhh..sure.."i said

I was playing with other children. My loneliness began to disappear.

and i'm still thinking about Gray fox was before...

and i dont know why father always said"you will never alone" to me before he is dead...

Name: CZM
age:9
Gender:male
height: 95 CM
weight : 20 Kg
Job : explorer/ alchemist

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Random Topics / Servant of Evil

« on: June 03, 2014, 05:37:42 AM »

Servant of evil(by kagamine Len and Kagamine Rin)


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=V2vSq0YoWjA

You're the queen, and I'm your servant.
We're a pitiable pair of twins separated by our fate.
I'm willing to become evil for you,
if only so that I could protect you.


   We were born into the world carrying others' expectations,
and blessed by the sound of the church's bells.
By the adults' own convenient arrangement,
our future was split into two.


   Even if the entire world
should become your enemy,
I will always protect you,
so you just be yourself and smile.


   You're the queen, and I'm your servant.
We're a pitiable pair of twins separated by our fate.
I'm willing to become evil for you,
if only so that I could protect you.


   When I went out to our neighboring nation,
I saw a girl of green in a town.
Because of her gentle voice and tender smile,
I fell in love with her at first sight.


   However, your highness the queen wish
the girl be erased from the world,
so I shall fulfill your wish.
But just why do my tears keep falling?


   You're the queen, and I'm your servant.
We're a maniacal pair of twins separated by our fate.
"Today's snack will be brioche."
You happily smile, with such innocence.



   Very soon this kingdom will end
at the hands of the enraged people.
If this is what they call "retribution",
then let me take upon myself to defy it.



   "Here, I'll lend you my clothes."
"Wear them and immediately start escaping."
"It's fine. We're twins after all."
"Nobody will be able to tell the difference

   I'm now the queen, and you're the fugitive.
We're a lamentable pair of twins separated by our fate.
If they must call you evil,
then, alas, I am too, for we share the same blood.

   Once upon a time,
there was a queen, my cute sibling,
who used to reign at the top
of a savage and ruthless kingdom.


   Even if the entire world   (Finally, the time has come,)
should become your enemy,   (as the bell's sound signals the end.)
I will always protect you,   (Not even bothering to look at the crowd)
so you just be happy somewhere else.   (you utter my favorite phrase.)


   You're the queen, and I'm your servant.
We're a pitiable pair of twins separated by our fate.
I'm willing to become evil for you,
if only so that I could protect you.


   If we could be reborn in our next life,
then please play with me again.(song )

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Writer's Guild / Heat-Haze days

« on: June 02, 2014, 06:08:38 AM »

Heat-haze days Ver.CF (featuring:Keldor)

cry to see Keldor was bleeding and death in the Road.

(previous.)

i wake up On June 2nd , 12:30 in the afternoon,
The weather was incredibly nice
And amidst the sickening rays of the dazzling sun
I spoke with Keldor, for I had nothing else to do

“Well, y’know, I kind of hate summer,”
keldor boldly murmured while petting a mongooses.

Ah, Keldor pursued that Mongooses as it ran away from Keldor
And what jumped out was the traffic light that changed to a glaring red

Suddenly, a truck came out of nowhere and struck Keldor as you screamed
Keldor scent, now mingled with sprayed blood, choked me
In the haze of lies, the haze of heat laughed, “This is all real!”
With that, like a cricket’s sound being disturbed, the light blue of summer darkened away.


I woke up upon my bed to the sound of a ticking clock
What time is it now?

On June 2nd, sometime past 12 in the morning
I recalled the sound of an awfully annoying cricket

But, y’know, it’s a little strange.
Yesterday, in a dream, I saw us walking in this same exact park
“Why don’t we go home now?” The second Keldor stepped off the pathway,
Everyone surrounding us turned their heads up to the sky and opened their mouths

From the sky, down dropped an iron pole that pierced Keldors body straight through
The sound of windchimes and Keldor ripping screams filled the spaces between the park trees
In this unnatural scene, the shimmering heat laughed, “This is the real thing!”
As my vision blurred away, I glanced at your profile, and thought I saw you smiling

Countless times have had me black out in the laughing heat like this
This cycle has repeated for decades. I’d realized that a long time ago.

In this kind of clichéd story, there must only be one ending.
Beyond this repeating summer day, it has to exist"I had to destroy the tragedy of death Keldor!!!".(close my eyes and cry)

(back to Truck Tragedy)

Suddenly, I pushed Keldor aside and jumped into the street; at that moment, the truck slammed into me
Your eyes and my twisted body were like hazy reflections of the blood that sprayed everywhere
If that praiseful heat haze laughed, “Serves you right!” again

Then this would be what you’d call a normal summer day.
But all of that ended today.

On June 2nd, keldor awoke upon her bed
And he said,

“I failed this days, too…” as he cradled a Mongooses.

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Writer's Guild / my short Story (using CF chat)

« on: May 26, 2014, 02:36:40 AM »

Lost in other dimensions Pt 1(using CF chat)

 CZM_adif using flashlight.
(13:53:34) CZM_adif: emmhhh.... hello... somebody here?
(13:54:54) * CZM_adif walking
(13:56:40) * CZM_adif searching....
(13:59:00) * CZM_adif found a letter
(14:03:40) CZM_adif: what's is it?
(14:03:51) * CZM_adif open the Letter
(14:04:02) * CZM_adif Read
(14:08:44) * CZM_adif Letter says" you must find a clue in here before you time is end. a deep from abyss"
(14:09:07) * CZM_adif pick up a White Rose
(14:10:05) CZM_adif: mhhh.. a rose.....?
(14:10:14) * CZM_adif Read again
(14:10:53) * CZM_adif Letter Says "Rose is your Life now"
(14:11:27) CZM_adif: huahhhh... a rose!!!!
(14:12:06) CZM_adif: i must find Clue in here now....
(14:12:42) * CZM_adif walking in the grand hall
(14:13:31) CZM_adif: huffhh... i must find a clue...
(14:14:31) * CZM_adif see a pages in Grand hall
(14:15:03) * CZM_adif Pick up pages
(14:15:08) * CZM_adif read
(14:16:51) * CZM_adif pages" you will be in warning"
(14:17:22) CZM_adif: hahh...me... why me?
(14:18:13) * CZM_adif walking in grand hall again
(14:19:43) * CZM_adif felt that follows him
(14:20:03) CZM_adif: who's there !
(14:20:34) * CZM_adif shining a flashlight into the back
(14:21:08) * CZM_adif nothing
(14:22:20) * CZM_adif bloody mannequin doll blink follow CZM_adif
(14:22:39) CZM_adif: arrgghh... get out of me!!!!
(14:22:50) * CZM_adif running
(14:24:23) * CZM_adif kick bloody mannequin dool
(14:24:52) * CZM_adif Cracked*
(14:25:08) CZM_adif: huffhhh...i'm safe
(14:26:06) * CZM_adif keep walking
(14:26:53) * CZM_adif see bloody portrait
(14:27:05) CZM_adif: what is this?
(14:28:25) * CZM_adif see a number on Bloody portrait
(14:28:58) * CZM_adif Number is "6551"
(14:29:44) * CZM_adif write the number in the Note
(14:30:26) CZM_adif: i think it's useful]:)
(14:31:11) * CZM_adif white rose petals plucked from the stalk
(14:32:01) CZM_adif: awhhh... petals now is 4 more
(14:32:39) * CZM_adif keep running
(14:33:39) CZM_adif: i must faster!!!
(14:34:34) * CZM_adif walk to the labyrinth
(14:35:05) CZM_adif: arrgh...labyrinth
(14:35:19) * CZM_adif keep running
(14:36:07) * CZM_adif 10 mannequin Doll follow CZM_adif
(14:36:35) * CZM_adif keep running
(14:37:00) * CZM_adif 2 ghost follow CZM_adif
(14:37:12) * CZM_adif Keep running!!!!!!!
(14:37:54) * CZM_adif see a way out
(14:38:17) * CZM_adif door locked
(14:39:33) * CZM_adif see attached door lock number
(14:40:14) * CZM_adif Enter a key number "6551"
(14:40:55) CZM_adif: arrghhh....faster..they follow me to kill me!!!!!
(14:41:07) * CZM_adif Door now open
(14:41:45) * CZM_adif enter the room and close the door
(14:42:03) CZM_adif: huufhhh... im safe]:
(14:42:53) * CZM_adif white rose petals plucked from the stalk
(14:43:11) CZM_adif: arrghhh... petals now is 3 more
(14:43:55) * CZM_adif walking because low stamina
(14:44:15) * CZM_adif see a mannequin head
(14:45:01) * CZM_adif searching the mannequin head
(14:45:29) * CZM_adif get a Blue key
(14:46:36) CZM_adif: i think it's can be useful
(14:47:45) * CZM_adif keep running in the 2 different dimensions
(14:48:54) * CZM_adif see pages in the stairs
(14:49:13) * CZM_adif pick up pages
(14:49:24) * CZM_adif read
(14:51:04) * CZM_adif Pages" come here CZM_adif "
(14:51:49) CZM_adif: I had to go into the blue door...
(14:52:10) * CZM_adif see pages again
(14:52:19) * CZM_adif pick up pages
(14:52:26) * CZM_adif read
(14:52:50) * CZM_adif pages" blue door is your destiny"
(14:53:12) CZM_adif: fiuuhh.. a good pages
(14:53:21) * CZM_adif keep walking
(14:55:23) * CZM_adif walk to the large room
(14:56:17) * CZM_adif keep walking
(14:56:47) * CZM_adif found a Red rose
(14:57:26) CZM_adif: i think it's not my Rose....
(14:57:53) CZM_adif: but i must pick it for save...
(14:58:03) * CZM_adif keep walking
(14:59:05) * CZM_adif locked door had been broken
(14:59:26) * CZM_adif heard the sound of broken doors
(14:59:55) CZM_adif: ahhhrrrrgghh...dammit!!!!
(15:00:04) * CZM_adif run faster
(15:01:22) * CZM_adif trapped by barbed trap
(15:01:47) * CZM_adif illness
(15:02:02) CZM_adif: arrgghhh.... im bleeding
(15:02:34) * CZM_adif keep walking
(15:03:33) * CZM_adif see a blue doors
(15:04:21) * CZM_adif 2 white rose petals plucked from the stalk
(15:04:29) CZM_adif: arrghhh....
(15:04:38) * CZM_adif keep walking
(15:05:22) * CZM_adif open the Blue doors with Blue key
(15:05:39) * CZM_adif closed the blue doors
(15:06:24) CZM_adif: huaafffhh....
(15:06:41) * CZM_adif see a pages
(15:07:46) * CZM_adif pick up pages
(15:07:54) * CZM_adif read
(15:12:02) * CZM_adif pages"You have to choose which one you want roses live if you sacrificed or Red that should you sacrifice"
(15:12:32) * CZM_adif Shocked
(15:14:10) CZM_adif: what... i must to do!!!
(15:14:33) CZM_adif: ......
(15:16:19) * CZM_adif red says "I sacrifice to not continue to suffer in your body"
(15:17:24) CZM_adif: no...red!!!
(15:17:31) CZM_adif: I had to sacrifice myself
(15:17:53) CZM_adif: I have to accept it
(15:19:00) * CZM_adif put a red rose uncontrollably
(15:19:15) CZM_adif: red.......
(15:19:51) * CZM_adif Red says" i will to be your friend forever "
(15:19:58) CZM_adif:
(15:21:03) * CZM_adif doors dimensions coming
(15:21:24) * CZM_adif doors says"sacrifice is complete you should get out of here"
(15:21:59) * CZM_adif see wilted red rose
(15:22:17) * CZM_adif crying
(15:22:41) * CZM_adif walk to dimensions doors
(15:24:05) * CZM_adif back to the other dimensions grand hall
(15:24:37) * CZM_adif get out from dimensions doors
(15:25:16) * CZM_adif gloomy
(15:25:57) CZM_adif: red...gone............
(15:26:22) CZM_adif: huffhh....i lie with myself
(15:27:25) CZM_adif: he always with me in chat
(and now CZM is not in cursed with Red again)

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Writer's Guild / My first Story

« on: May 17, 2014, 05:26:19 AM »

hi all i got a short story Of CZM_adif from my Sleeping
(featuring:Geary,medic_Jackal,Tallyn,Trask and Selden)
when all Forget you



 One day in caerreyn vilage. I and my friends went to the Selden home to play pool for joking, sharing stories and etc.i'm happy even if they see all the laughing, smiling, excited and happy.after all having fun in the pool until evening.I even given a warm farewell  all my friends from tallyn, Fox_gamer01, Virmir, medic_jackal, Geary and others.

I say "good bye all, hopefully see you tomorrow"

"I hope we meet again CZM" Selden said

I left the house and walked to the Selden home while on the road because of a sleepy yawn. in a cursory way I met an old fox Gray being tired.

"Is there something I can help you?" I said
"good kid. could you please buy this drink, I have yet to find a buyer at all" he said
"Could I buy a bottle of it?"i said
"sure"he said

then I buy it and drink it. Spontaneous direct head dizzy

'' What's wrong with this drink... old man "

''hahaha .. you're stupid drinking the potion that removes the public memory about you .... you are so idiot"

old man instantly disappeared snap. however dizziness in my head still feels in my head. till I fall asleep.
 
sunrise when I woke up from my bed. maybe I had thought was just a dream. I immediately got up and went to the market to buy everyday goods. when I was walking I was met with Geary.

"hi Geary" i said

Geary just see me just as if seeing me as a newcomer. he was immediately goes without saying any word."what happening in here?..... , Hufhh.....nevermind"i said

I was on my way to the market. Arriving there I saw a lot of whispering to each other merchants. and one of the merchants say

"hi stranger welcome in this market"
I was confused .... and started to wonder about why everyone here forget me.Medic_Jackal even  holding my shoulders and said.

"hi stranger welcome to Carreyn Village"

i was angry and said

"i'm not a Stranger!!!"

then I stay away from the market as soon as possible. and one Merchant said
"that person is craziest people I've ever met"

when I ran and I met with Geary.Geary also said" hi the craziest Stranger"

I also continue to run regardless of anyone. until I got lost in the big woods. I was walking to go to my house. then I also met Tallyn being injured. I then first aid and he pronounces"thank you ....stranger"

(in tears) "your welcome" i said

I also continue to go to my house as soon as possible. in tears"argh ... why does everyone forget about me"
   while walking I was met with Trask.

   ""hi stranger ... are you have a trouble now?" he said
  i'm just Nods
  "what if someone was forgotten by everyone .. what that means is that everyone must have forgotten that person?"i said
Trask  Says  "If people were forgotten by everyone there may be one person who is very close to the people that are still remembered by the people"

'' do you have any question again... ?"

" no" i said

Trask then go ... and I continued on to my house. and I get home I'm sad, pensive, alone and crying. and I saw my childhood pictures with Selden in Caerreyn Vilage.

(back to childhood CZM)

"hey Selden .. let's play ball" Geary said

"why we do not invite red fox play with us?"Selden said .

Jackal said"he's a weird kid .. Why we play with him"

then in the river I'm sad because my father had died. Spontaneous someone who has held my shoulders.
"hi red fox...do you want to play a Ball With us"Selden said
(look back)" emm...ehhhh..sure.."i said

I was playing with other children. My loneliness began to disappear.
(back to the present)

" Why i must alone..what's problem with me...i'm just not an Stranger!!!"

I was standing on the edge of the river. I sat crying on the spot. I was now alone. and instantly there that holds my shoulders and said
"CZM why are you in here ...? why do not you to my house to play with the other your friend?."

then I also look back and say"Selden do you know me?...."

"what did you say? did you forget that you've ever played ball with friends  and I in here? ..."

I cried and then hugged tightly Selden.

" erggh...efhh... why you hugs me?"

after the tragedy ... I was told everything to Selden. Selden was Give me a potion to restore the memory of my friends about me. everything was running smoothly and I'm not lonely anymore forever. even right now I actually have many friends


(idea of: a dream in sleep CZM)