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Title: The Merchant of Caerreyn
Post by: Jonas on June 16, 2010, 01:16:08 PM

So when I was looking through the suggested titles, the second I saw Kai's suggestion I knew there was only one possible option: Voltar! So I asked myself what would be a fun thing to write about with Voltar, and the comic provided the solution to that: hats! The result was this. I think its ok, but I may have made him too "obsessive" and the "action" scene may not have come off right since I'm still not good at those. Honestly though, if the end makes you think EPIC VOLTAR MANOEUVER then I've done my job.

Title: Re: The Merchant of Caerreyn
Post by: KaiAdin on June 16, 2010, 09:53:18 PM

Woo! Voltar Story! 

Title: Re: The Merchant of Caerreyn
Post by: Virmir on June 17, 2010, 07:22:02 PM

Gah ha ha!

Great story!  I think you nailed his character quite nicely. [:)