Author Topic: Mike's Candy Store: Group Commission  (Read 4030 times)

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Reply #30 on: January 11, 2018, 08:33:00 AM


Updated sketch, I'll be sending folks PM's for paypal information. Then get started with the inking and colors once the $25 payments are in.

Per usual, any comments/suggestions/corrections to make?



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Reply #31 on: January 11, 2018, 08:48:22 AM
Looks cool!

Could I get my gryphon wearing my signature PR flag bandanna? (Seen here on left: https://www.dropbox.com/s/z2zftf7cb09vj0p/ArtAzariahAzalea.png?dl=0 )



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Reply #32 on: January 11, 2018, 09:46:03 AM
Looks cool!

Could I get my gryphon wearing my signature PR flag bandanna? (Seen here on left: https://www.dropbox.com/s/z2zftf7cb09vj0p/ArtAzariahAzalea.png?dl=0 )

awwww!, they're so adorable! ^^



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Reply #33 on: January 11, 2018, 08:17:49 PM
This looks good!  The only thing to note is to be in sure to include Sierra's cape.

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Reply #34 on: January 11, 2018, 09:01:43 PM
Looks good, though I want to make sure my tail is showing, I think I see the gryphon's tail which might be hard to tell apart on the sketch.



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Reply #35 on: January 17, 2018, 04:33:11 PM


Additional Wip'age, still alot of little things to fix. Like Sierra's and Caleb's face. Also Plazmette's tail. Otherwise, still alot to do here.

Comments criticisms concerns? ...cookies?



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Reply #36 on: January 17, 2018, 06:05:23 PM

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Reply #37 on: January 17, 2018, 07:27:22 PM
XD cool



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Reply #38 on: January 17, 2018, 07:33:49 PM
For Sierra, I kind of liked how you had the sketch better, with the visible belly and poking at it with her arm.  Also liked her expression looking down.  No sash needed hanging down with the belt, and don't forget the white tail tip.  Sorry to be nit-picky, ha ha

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Reply #39 on: January 19, 2018, 04:40:29 PM
Would it be possible to do dark brown on Talcott's hands and feet? Figure so he matches the fox fur pattern a bit better.

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Reply #40 on: January 19, 2018, 05:46:48 PM
I hadn't noticed until it was colored, but the bandolier really should go under the right arm.  If it's too late to fix that kind of thing, I understand.

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Reply #41 on: January 20, 2018, 10:50:02 PM
Wow, it's really coming together :D



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Reply #42 on: January 22, 2018, 06:16:01 PM
« Last Edit: January 23, 2018, 06:18:26 PM by Caleb_Lloyd »



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Reply #43 on: January 22, 2018, 09:38:40 PM
Gah ha ha, this looks great!  Last thing I noticed: Sierra's cape collar should be the same color purple as the rest of her cape instead of gray.

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Reply #44 on: January 23, 2018, 08:23:33 PM
Mike, you have some of the best candies!

Delicious picture, love how it turned out!