Author Topic: "Reyan Saga" (unfinished)  (Read 78394 times)

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Reply #75 on: January 25, 2012, 06:03:34 PM
Part 6

Gavin and Mara wandered deeper into the forest, where they eventually came upon a mossy grove filled with the sounds of twittering birds and the warmth of radiant sunlight peeking through a verdant canopy. Here they dug a decent-sized den in the side of a soft mound where they lived happily ever after in relative peace.

THE END
« Last Edit: January 25, 2012, 08:31:57 PM by Virmir »

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Reply #76 on: January 25, 2012, 06:07:18 PM
.......
We are not that amused Virmir.

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Reply #77 on: January 25, 2012, 06:08:07 PM
Speak for yourself.  I burst out laughing IRL

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Reply #78 on: January 25, 2012, 06:54:51 PM
BAD. BAD LAZY VIRMIR.

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Reply #79 on: January 25, 2012, 08:27:26 PM
They wondered deeper into the forest?
So...they're exploring with their minds?



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Reply #80 on: January 25, 2012, 08:32:30 PM
Blast, once instance in a small paragraph and I STILL screwed that up. [;)

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Reply #81 on: January 26, 2012, 12:16:58 PM
Not.
Funny.
At.
All.
*suddenly stops looking angry and curls up in the corner, sobbing...*

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Reply #82 on: January 26, 2012, 02:16:04 PM
BAD VIRMIR. Do you SEE what you've done to Tvorsk? FINISH REYAN SAGA PROPERLY.

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Reply #83 on: January 26, 2012, 05:43:33 PM
Not.
Funny.
At.
All.
*suddenly stops looking angry and curls up in the corner, sobbing...*

*goes to pet Tvorsk's back* At least someone else is not pleased with this copout.

(07:46:59) Robak: watch the horns they are pointy
(22:04:28) Risu: omg, its raining antimuffins!
(00:42:42) * (Rage_plushie) doesn`t move. instead he ponders the secrets of the universe...and wonders why trask smells faintly of strawberries.
(00:36:36) Virmir: It's fattening celergy!


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Reply #84 on: January 26, 2012, 06:40:52 PM

"Mission taken!" [:P


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Reply #85 on: April 03, 2012, 01:17:19 AM
Yeah update!  [:P [:P [:P



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Reply #86 on: August 02, 2015, 10:36:22 PM
This was a really imaginative and creative story, I'd love to see where it goes, but it hasn't been updated in about three years.  Cool ideas, interesting characters, it sort of reminded me a bit of the book series The Divide by Elizabeth Kay.  With a creature using a stone that is linked to its life.  All in all, it was a fun read but I'd like to one day see more.  Nice work!



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Reply #87 on: August 02, 2015, 10:40:26 PM
Thank you!  Unfortunately I don't have any plans to continue this, although I think it works as a short story if you take out the last part (not including the joke ending).

Thanks for reading!

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Reply #88 on: August 25, 2015, 02:09:13 PM
You know, if this story is actually finished and done, per chance does it need the "(unfinished)" part in the title anymore?

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Reply #89 on: August 25, 2015, 10:44:30 PM
It is not really finished the way I intended it in 2008. [;)

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