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on: November 15, 2011, 01:01:02 AM

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Reply #1 on: November 15, 2011, 01:08:49 AM
How I wish I had someone who could do that for me.

I know it's cliche', but it needed to be said sometime.

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Reply #2 on: November 15, 2011, 05:13:46 AM
Alarm clocks: easily the worst sound I've ever heard. Mainly because I'm rudely awoken by them.



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Reply #3 on: November 15, 2011, 05:45:53 AM
Round one
Raccoon: 0
Alarm Clock: 1

(07:46:59) Robak: watch the horns they are pointy
(22:04:28) Risu: omg, its raining antimuffins!
(00:42:42) * (Rage_plushie) doesn`t move. instead he ponders the secrets of the universe...and wonders why trask smells faintly of strawberries.
(00:36:36) Virmir: It's fattening celergy!


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Reply #4 on: November 15, 2011, 08:15:48 AM
Fun comic as always, but I have some points of suggestions:

1. Maybe add a second panel of Geo sleeping before the alarm goes off. When I loaded the page, my eyes immediately fell on the centremost image of the middle pannel, which completely threw me off since I didn't immediately Geo's hanging tail in the first pannel.

2. Move the alarm sound effect so it is solely in the background of the "AAAAGH!" pannel, and make the sound text larger. Size of text relates to the "loudness" of the sound, and right now the alarm appears only slightly louder than Geo's snoring.

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Reply #5 on: November 15, 2011, 02:40:21 PM
I purposely place my alarm clock on the opposite end of the room to make me move about as much as possible.  Did I also mention I sleep on a top bunk?

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Reply #6 on: November 15, 2011, 03:58:10 PM
I purposely place my alarm clock on the opposite end of the room to make me move about as much as possible.  Did I also mention I sleep on a top bunk?

A lot of faceplanting, I assume?

(07:46:59) Robak: watch the horns they are pointy
(22:04:28) Risu: omg, its raining antimuffins!
(00:42:42) * (Rage_plushie) doesn`t move. instead he ponders the secrets of the universe...and wonders why trask smells faintly of strawberries.
(00:36:36) Virmir: It's fattening celergy!