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1  Other Realms / Writer's Guild / Re: The Coonie Coin (and the Amazing Adventures of Azariah Raccoon) on: September 01, 2014, 11:17:25 PM
Interesting start! Looking forward to seeing what coony adventures await you. Gray Fox Wink
2  Other Realms / Writer's Guild / Re: Car Wash on: September 01, 2014, 10:04:31 PM
Caleb, stuff needs to happen in stories. Like, giant pizza robot attack or something. Trees.
3  Other Realms / Writer's Guild / Re: Houdini on: September 01, 2014, 10:03:27 PM
This is pretty good! It starts out like your average cut and dry TF story, and I was expecting things to resolve that way. And then you follow through with his experiences post-TF, and throw some twists as the end which are pretty cool. It's just the start of this guy's journey. Good stuff!
4  Other Realms / Art Gallery / Stopmotion on: September 01, 2014, 09:26:49 PM
Need a new thread as what follows doesn't quite fit in the other topics.

Take it away, VirBot!
5  Other Realms / Writer's Guild / Re: Freezing on: August 30, 2014, 08:44:41 PM
Ha ha! This is aweeeeesome. I love the crazy-TFs as defense.  I think I totally make sense as a general-king.

But the eeeevil mage got away! This must be resolved once and for all! Part 2 MUST be written!
6  Other Realms / Art Gallery / Re: Chase's July Pairings on: August 15, 2014, 08:19:04 PM
This is great. No changes from me!
7  Other Realms / Writer's Guild / Re: For What Is Between Us on: August 13, 2014, 11:27:26 PM
Ha ha, this seems like a setup for a MMO here with the adventuring and loot and all. The part about the too-expensive robe made me chuckle (poor Selena!). Also amused by Kendo's innate distrust of otters. Gray Fox Wink

Also read the character info. I quite like the version of Kendo you have here-- deep seeded reasons behind his behavior. He has Issues with a capital I-- I love stuff like this. Gray Fox Wink

Good stuff! Looking forward to the next part!
8  Other Realms / Writer's Guild / Re: Sunlight Through The Clouds on: August 13, 2014, 11:14:10 PM
Sephen strikes me as pretty silly for listening to a lecture about not trusting people who offer dragon TFs from the wizard, whom he trusts, and then immediately going for it from someone he gets bad vibes from. Obviously his father told him not to go see the wizard again, but it doesn't sound like he cares about what his father has to say. You may want to spend some more time on why he doesn't go seek advice, such as playing up his excitement and perhaps have him think about going back to the wizard for advice, but dismissing the idea.

That said-- yay TF! Looking forward to what happens next!
9  Other Realms / Art Gallery / Re: Chase's July Pairings on: August 09, 2014, 02:36:51 PM
Okay, sent!
10  Other Realms / Writer's Guild / Re: CZM back story on: August 08, 2014, 10:53:39 PM
Ah, hate it when that happens. (Monsters in underground labs. They get you every time. Trees.)
11  Other Realms / Writer's Guild / Re: shadows & mystery on: August 08, 2014, 10:50:38 PM
White! Come one, man, you can manage some paragraphs here!

What you have right here is a story outline. What you need to do next is flesh out all the sentences into paragraphs with description and punctuation. You can do better than this!
12  Other Realms / Writer's Guild / Re: For What Is Between Us on: August 08, 2014, 10:43:59 PM
Okay, read the prologue.  I was surprised and amused at Kendo's role here, and was ready to nitpick, but it looks like you have a pretty good handle on the Virmirish personality here! The setup and world is interesting and definitely want to see where you're going with this.

Looking forward to the next part!
13  Other Realms / Art Gallery / Re: Chase's July Pairings on: August 08, 2014, 08:58:36 PM
Yay! I love it! Totally approved. Happy Gray Fox

Let me know how much I owe you!
14  Other Realms / Art Gallery / Re: Selena's Drawings on: August 04, 2014, 01:37:48 PM
Ha ha, very cool! I like the suit. Gray Fox Wink
15  Other Realms / Writer's Guild / Re: The Crimson Chronicles on: July 28, 2014, 11:13:05 AM
Okay, caught up now. Liked the latest installment! Was amused by the rambling on the old English currency analogue.
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